Written in response to Mara Eastern’s Poetry 101: Rehab
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Written in response to Mara Eastern’s Poetry 101: Rehab
NO
no job
no prospects
no money
no plans
no matter,
as long as you’re here.
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It somehow has a slightly romantic meaning beneath its lines 🙂
(DId it make sense the way I phrased it?)
I loved your writing style right from the start and I still do 🙂
I am impatiently waiting for the next one 😉
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Glad you liked it, sorry, missed this comment in a hectic day, but hoped you liked the most recent one 🙂
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Unexpected ending!
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That’s what I was going for! Hope you liked it 🙂
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Great one. Simple yet profound. i like it
brett fish
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Oh that’s excellent! A bit tongue-in-cheek and excellent! It reminds me a bit of Henry Miller’s attitude – except better 😉
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Haha high praise indeed, though I’m not sure about any comparison in quality, I feel your tongue may be firmly in your cheek as well 😛
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Oh no, this time my tongue is not in my cheek, sometimes it starts to hurt, so I have to remove it from its usual tongue-in-cheek position…
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I didn’t expect that ending! I found this poem rather sweet and wonderful! Way to go!
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